The girls (
the clients) didn't particularly like this variation although I preferred it over the final design.
- The light yellow background further ties all the elements together.
- The student name is more prominent, moved to the left side of the card. Sam and her sisters preferred the name under the photo -- looks even more like a police mug shot to me with it that way.
- Placed the bottom rectangle under the photo. Gives the photo more prominence and it doesn't look so much like it's trapped under the rectangles.